Sunday, October 7, 2007

The Wal-mart makes us get various benefits with nice goods and services!

EAP 2 Writers workshop

Name : Sungjun Ha

What would you do if you and your friends watch the final game of world series 2007 at home? Most people may be going to plan to buy some beer and chips from groceries such as Wal-mart. Wal-mart is the closest to us as the representative grocery. However, some people may claim that Wal-mart is harmful for us to consume soundly because of the monopoly in the American circulation market. Otherwise, Wal-mart contributes the Americans to consume rationally. In other words, Wal-mart gives us various financial, social and personal benefits because it has more goods and services than we can count.

First of all, Wal-mart gives us financial and economical benefits because it chiefly sells various commodities we need. In case of the Wal-mart in Carbondale, it has almost commodities and products except for hard drinks, cigarettes and cocaine. Also we do not waste gas to go to various markets if we buy several goods and services at the Wal-mart. Actually, the book store deals with books and magazines, toys are bought in toy stores and the foods are dealt with groceries; However, we do not need to go to varied stores in order to purchase these goods because Wal-mart sells these goods in the same place. Accordingly, we can save money as well as oil due to the Wal-mart.

Next, we may be able to make harmonious family since the Wal-mart gets us go shopping with the family members. Wal-mart can provide many goods and services which are used by everyone from children to old people. So all members of the family can go shoping together. Actually, a wal-mart in Carbondale is visited by more than two people. Moreover, Wal-mart which we can be with families helps us to understand each other among all members of the family. While shopping with the family, parents and children can know what their sons and daughters like and what their parents like. In fact, we can not know any toys which our sons and daughters like unless we go shopping with our children. Therefore, Wal-mart can make us go shopping with the family and help discordant families to improve the relationship of family members.

Finally, Wal-mart lets us get various conveniences in personal, daily life. Wal-mart helps us to consume rationally. Wal-mart not only deals with many goods and services but also shows us various brands of the same kind to compare them easily and rapidly. As a matter of fact, we can see diverse goods in the same kind of commodity. In case of the cola, there are two kinds of cola: Coca cola and Pepsi cola and in case of toothpastes or soap, there are many kinds of them which are made in unknown companies. So we can compare each other at the Wal-mart. Furthermore, Wal-mart helps people, who move somewhere lately, to adapt new town rapidly. Wal-mart has a lot of chains in every town of the United States.

most people cannot help moving other towns from their home town because of many reasons like hunting the job and studying away from home. In this time, they also need many things. Wal-mart gives us obtain these things more easily. In other words, Wal-mart gives people who move to our town lately the convenience to buy somethings they need right now. Consequently, the Wal-mart having a lot of chains in almost towns of the United States lets us get conveniences to compare several goods and services and to adapt new life easily. For example, the students who move to Evergreen Terrace lately can not helped going to the Wal-mart because they needed toilet papers, light bulbs, drinking water and soap or shampoo. So, many new neighbors went shopping to the Wal-mart.

On the contrary, some people may claim that the monopoly of Wal-mart in circulation industry of the United States is very serious problem maintaining the circulation industry soundly since more American consumers are likely to go shopping to the Wal-mart owing to the convenience. However, the trait of circulation industry can not be monopolized by a circulation company because the monopoly occurs when any goods are produced by a producer. In other words, the monopoly in economics means that when the goods is only made by a producer in the market or there is no substitute for it, the provider or producer controls a mount of its supply by itself in order to rise up the price. Accordingly, the monopoly can not exist in the circulation industry because circulation enterprises do not produce the commodities but gather and distribute them between the consumer and the supplier. Therefore, removing small stores in our town because of Wal-mart is a natural phenomenon of the capitalism or liberal market economy. For instance, the Micro Soft producing Window XP may monopolize because it can either makes only one operating system which is available for IBM computers or we have difficulty in looking for the substitute for Window XP. However, Compack making and selling several computers with Window XP can not monopolize since there are many companies which can make the substitutes for computers made in Compack.

In conclusion, Wal-mart helps us to save the money and time, to consume rationally and soundly and to adapt new town of the United States. Many consumers do not need more time and money to buy goods and services that we need because Wal-mart sells almost goods and services which are allowed to merchandise by the law. Additionally, it makes us obtain better goods and services since it gives us the opportunity to compare to each of them certainly. Moreover, we can easily adapt new place owing to the Wal-mart. Similarly, Wal-mart is beneficial to us due to several conveniences.

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